|Reviews for Come Closer: The Ballad Of The Blade|
| Eirien 12/13/04 . chapter 1
Great idea to choose the perspective of the blade as the speaker's voice, that makes it really uncanny and very powerful, and the "emotionless" language that has been criticised by a previous reviewer is in my opinion exactly what makes it so creepy, since the blade would naturally not have emotions; reading it the way it is expressed cuts to my heart becuase I know the attraction ... The blade is cruel and relentless, and you have portrayed that well.
| vintage fade 9/17/04 . chapter 1
Don't know what to say... If this is how you really feel, how does cutting pull you in so deep? Mever mind the question, I know the answer. It's like my obsession with my weight, my obsession with striving to perfect my writing... I enjoyed this piece of work, though not completely understanding it. Overall, good job. I wouldn't say it's one of my favorites, but it definitely has a good point.
| scarlet sunrise 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Very chilling. I like it.
| Tanzonite Black 7/12/04 . chapter 1
Nice concept with having the point of view from the blade. However I found this poem lacked emotion, nothing jumped up and smacked me while reading it. In line two it should by "you're" for you are, not "your."
| bubblesugarsocks 6/21/04 . chapter 1
| S. R. Devaste 6/9/03 . chapter 1
Very good, and very orginal...gret work.
Please reveiw/read some of my work.
| cosmo-queen 6/9/03 . chapter 1
Excellent poem, the way you wrote this was really creepy. Great work, keep writing :)