Okay i'll go suicide now, bye.

Jk jk

Pretty good, I liked it. All-round, it was great; the problem wan't specific, but rather in the joining of the flow and the theme. The theme is heavy and powerful, while the flow is airy. Just work on that!

Me say, I like cuz i wuz a part of it! Nah, not really, but really good. You even made it rhyme! Thxs for takin my suggestion from previous review! C, c? Wat did I tell ya? GREAT! @.@ oro?