i can agree, sometimes i feel like i in daze...wait i'm getting one now...Z
later

::stares at cool new review thingy::
okay, i'll go back to the peom now...

that was very well written :)
i kno exactly how that feels.
sorry about your finger :-/ that can't be fun...
:D

I know the feeling...though I have read much more depressing. This one actually contained a fair bit of optimism!

Amazing piece of work.

Brain is fried, otherwise I'd say more
:(

Keep writing!

This is so good! I can totally relate to it, a very honest piece of work! :D

I liked this one. It's not incredibly depressing, though. I've seen much worse. It does a good job of capturing a moment most people feel at one point or another in their lives. Very effective.

I understand how this is. People always think they're helping when realy they are destroying. Great poem./

I decided I'd review yours because you were kind enough to review mine. OMG. that was so great. I mean, it made so much sense, and it was beautifully written. I know this is random, but I envy you so greatly, because I have always wanted to be chinese, is that odd? I'm adding this poem to my favorites.

nice poem :) keep up the good work

and thanks for the reviews lol ^_^

A distressed cry for that which leaves us at the most in-oportune moments in our lives. Touching
~ Stevie

Well, I actually found that quite inspirational. Call me an optimist...

i've felt like that so many times. great job expressing that feeling.

Oh, I feel like that all the time. I always love to be alone, it's a great comfort to me. You expressed this feeling very well.

Fractured it? Ouch. The worse I ever got was a jam. I hope it gets better soon.


~Heart of the Sword

I liked it. I've been there i know how it is. And i like the poem because it's real. Please come read some of mine!