Haha love the little comment from Discordia about Lupus's "fifty-times great-grandson". Little confused by the constant reference of "Scribe"? Is that Mozelle's last name? Only just noticed some grammar problems in your latin, lol. Manere is "to remain"- not the vocative. And "sedo" would be "I calm down". But otherwise I'd like to commend you on your dedicated use of it- incorporating as many words as you have is admirable. I'd have to disagree with your "America doesn't LIKE undocumented people" comment though, being from California, but I get the point. Nice to see everything flipped on his head. Was really looking forward to her reiterating that she was free, nice slap in the face for Lupus. Sad that there aren't more chapter of this one- very cute :) Would have loved to read more! Always well written and a good read.

this story is AMAZING

are you going to continue it? please do... i cant wait to read the rest

hope to hear (or read) more from you soon

x

oh hey, this is a good start to the sequel. i hope you update it! ~ Alenor

wow, this ones a lot lighter than the first series, I also like this one becuase I was rooting for Lupus/Mozelle all the way, not the Italian guy who picks Mozelle up at the end of the first one

This story is absolutely amazing and I've fallen in love with the characters.

Please consider finishing this. You have so many people who want to see the end of this. An author has duties to themself foremost, but also a duty to their readers. I hope you finish this story, because I really want to see the end. :)

(And perhaps some more Lupus x Mozelle. Heheh.)

Please please update. it's like what. the 3rd time ive read this story? i can't not have this story unfinished. please please finish it. :)

Please finish this!
I love this story and really would love to know how it ends!
You are amazing. :D

i love love love your stories...and this one is fab...but when are you going to finish it? its been like 2 yrs *crys* pls? pretty pls?

hey, love how's the story going so far...bt question, is it discontinued? cause if it is, then ur making me cry, seriously, i've grown attached to it. Hopefully its nt.
ciao!

"Well," said Mozelle, "It's starting to get late. I guess we ought to head home."

"Yeah. I don't like being out after dark--not even in your or my neighborhood," said Mozelle.


Hee hee, I giggled when I read that. =)

And I had a difficult time trying to find stories like this one (person from past, travels to modern day). Thanks for sharing! Also, I took a class on Roman Civ last year and I mostly liked how you paid attention to the Roman things. There were a few things I didn't agree with in the beginning chapters of the first story(prequel?) but I'm so tired right now, I can't even remember... Ah well, if I do remember than I'll just add another review to that story. Yay! Reviews= good!

...I just realized now.

He isn't wearing underwear, is he?

Why'd you stop? I personally enjoy this story a lot and I hope you continue. I might even like it more than the first one. But it has been a long time so I suppose I won't get my hopes up.
~Kim

So um what happens next?

Aww. I can't believe you haven't updatedanything since last year! Come back! lol. I love the sequel, great job and all the lovely compliments in the world!

come back to us scribe!