OH COME ON. don't leave me hanging!

THAT IS SUCH A GOOD STORY...write. write. write. write.

i shall drill this message into your head...

i was just wondering why you never finished this story it seems really good!

please please please you have got to add some more to this bcs i cannot stand the suspense and i just have to know how this ends

Glad to see this updated again. I think I'd agree with Alison. I don't trust this Jim...
Update soon!

Brilliant story, love the suspense. The characters and plot are both well done, even though it's been a wee while since I've read this, I still remembered what was going on, strange for me, though _
Hey, you know that bit where Ken was talking about techno myths? Well, did you by any chance get that from The Lost World by Micheal Crichton? Becuase I was reading that last night and it had more or less exactly the same paragraph in it. Just wandering. Hope you do continue to update.

Really good! Love all the mystery. :)

When are you going to continue this? I'm curious the going-ons between Ken and Alison. It's too bad they have to move again. I hope you continue with this story.

Interesting story. I love it! I read the whole thing in one sitting. I hope there'll be more chapters.

Raven

great chapter! I love this story. :-)

Awesome chapter! :-)

hey! I love this story so far! Especially since i want to be a DA when I'm older. Are you one or know anything about them? Well, I cant wait to finish what u've written so far. (PS. ur a great author)

Great chapter! Is Kathy really going to leave? Hum...I wonder what is going to happen. Please update soon! :-)

Really good chapter! Keep up the good work! :-)

Great couple of chapters! Can't wait to find out what happens now that they are in New York. :-)

Great chapter, maybe Ken's not so bad afterall. :-) Thanks for reviewing my story!