Another sadistic woman tale, eh? I think you should have made this one a poem, the concept would have been aplied more effectivly...m..yeah. Well, keep writing...I think I reviewed all of you writings now.

lol well thats pretty creepy stuff you write, but it is very well written nonetheless. kind of short, but im not one to flame. keep up the good work

love from me

wow! this one is really good too! yes, rly good. you should have maybe elaborated on petit peu just cos its almost like a long poem. ouioui? im having freenglish problems. anyways, tu rock, et your work et amazing, yay! we are all happy persones.
best wishes
ella.
sarah.

Hey my dearest *Vivica*
This was wow.Again.I need a new word.Oh well.It was so amazing.Didn't exactly get it but it was so amazing.Oh and don't worry I don't think you need help.Well maybe you do but don't we all.*mwahaha*Jesus,I'm rambling.Please write so much more.
Love and Pain(haha)
*Jessicka*

Oh,wicked, wicked. Loved it.

I thought the description and detailing was amzing. very well written, but i dont really get it. wats ur point. thats not ashort story, its a poem.

This was good, but where is the oumff

very well written but creepy

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That was really good but kinda creepy. Do you actually feel that way about yourself? Maybe you should get some help but tha story was rilly good.