nice
tho when i speak of my elements the descriptions seem to differ quite a bit...
nevermind! ^.^;; heh heh

Very good!

very nice! the wording is excellant as is the way the entire thing works together to create a mental picture as each word is devoured. keep writing!
peace out! -sea star4

very eastern. i like it. there's some funky ascii characters messing it up though, you may want to check it out ;)