(Dammit, my ff.net nick is unavailable... ah well)

Um... wow, this is pretty great stuff you've got here. Spent a while reading through it all and I look forward to seeing more. I'm not much for reviews, although I'd rather like to see where all these characters you've introduced come together... it's a bit much to flesh out each of these personalities in detail, only to move on to someone else again. So far the only unifying constant is Ameretat, and she never takes any sort of central role.

Oh, and also you've got a good knack for naming, although I know you've derived many of these characters from mythology (I've never heard of this religion before though -- is there any particular reason for the connection?)

Anyway, yeah on the whole this is a brilliant piece of original work, I wish you luck with it. This one's going on my favs.