Elegant, wild. You love the word crimson, don't you? True, it is a beautiful word. Your poems are difficult to understand at once; at twice they are delightful. Keep writing!

rather morbid, but fascinating. it flows. it is good.

thats beautiful. It really is. Thats all there is to it. Its heart wrentching, but it is beautiful. I duno why, it it an awful situation and everything, but seriously, i luv the imagery in this poem! I LUV this poem! i really do

Very good!

This was excellent. Very deep and profound. Extremely well-written too, your choice of words was very powerful. Great work, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

Whoa, it started out happy but then it turned...*shudder* Just kidding, it was cool. I've never had experiences like those described fortunately.

-Baisl

Beautiful. For me, your poem kinda hits close to home. I was completely swept off my a certain someone. I got the feeling of being thrown around, stepped on, and spit on. I was taken for granted... lied to. God, it sucked. I don't know if that was exactly where you were going with the poem, but thats what I got from it. Again, beautiful work.

I am impressed. Are you sure you are only 14? I could of sworn you were even older than me. I sucked at writing when i was your age. You have reviewed more of my poems than anyone else and i thank you for it. Keep writing! I would write more but i get to get to work.

Peace out

Belladonna

the writings excellent. you really care about the mentioned people, but, well, i dont know actually. my expewrience with guys doesnt make me very helpful, but i love the poem, and remember this is jsut a highschool relationship, chances are it wont last, but dont give up hope.

Nia

p.s. last stanza rocked!

I wrote a poem that could posibly describ how your friend feels. 2 and 2 make 4. This is a great poem. I like the words. Very descriptive. Keep up the good work!