I liked it.


~Heart of the Sword

ah I LOVE IT!! hehe i sound like Tim.. lol.. anyways, is this for craig or robby? i think craig cause it was in seventh grade.. hehe.. robby wasn't in your life yet.. lololol.. and now he's your husband!! well, i'll talk to ya... right now!! goodbye FRANKIE!

nice poem! very interesting... i know how it feels. keep up the good work ^^

Heartfelt and meaningful. Awesome job! Thanks for your reviews. Keep writing..

Hmm...no I think you would like my poem, "Holes", judging by what you wrote here. It's very good, and no need to rhyme! Everyone loves a peice that's straightforward and to the point!