Rich, beautiful colors throughout, and the frozen stillness just highlights that. Nice work. *adds you to favorite authors* :D

Whoa... why didn't I read this before? Great poem, Mime, awesome. You described this tapestry very well.

Nicely worded! It has meaning for anyone who loves a particular painting or picture! Just reading it had me thinking of mine!

that would be boring to live in an unchanging world. i feel sorry for the tapestry. (then again, i'm weird like that) very good though, i can picture it in my mind very clearly. keep it up! =^^=

Wow...wow...wow. That was an amazingly wonderful poem...Wow. Great job! Putting this on my faves.

O, very cool. The Redwall series is pretty darn cool. I love the tapestry that Brain Jacques always describes in the book.
Very nifty poem.
Great work!

~ Little Dog Muse

Really sweet and pretty poem. Great descriptions, and I loved the part "The morning dew is never wet./The golden sun rises, but never sets." Great job

~Jess

This is excellently written, I love the rhyming couplets. They're brilliant

I love the image of frozen life that's placed in your mind from this.

i really like this. it creates a feeling of frozen life and how pointlessly eternal everything is.

Nice poem. Thanks for the reviews.
the over all tone of this is like trapped life. Or like the promise of immortality, and the lonliness that that gift entails...or something. I like it, good job.

Cheers!

Hey, you've written more! Sorry, I shoud've seen these earlier. Anyway, this is a very good poem to start off with. It is a lot like one of the Redwall books. I must recommend, though, that you read the poetry of William Blake. He is nothing short of brilliant and I think you would like him a lot. BTW, sorry about your finger. Hope you feel better.