sounds intriguing
plz write more!

Really good keep going please

i like this. i wonder y u haven't written another chapter. please write more.

I don't believe that any sort of lesbian relationship can happen that fast...anyways, I liked the story. Write some more.

hehe i can see this story is going somewhere :) really great first chapter!! cant wait for the second :)

OMG! You can't stop there I love your story please continue! Laters!

~Sammy

Hmm... nice start. I like your two main characters... although Gwen does seem very... preppy. Spanking? At 17? For drinking? I was drinking when I was like 14, so I'm glad my younger siblings don't hold threats like that over my head...
Anyway, I like this, and I hope you continue!

OOh,a whole new look on the cool girl/geek topic,I love it!


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