Wow this was really short but it def. made sense for this poem. It all went so fast (what happened in the poem and reading it 2). So sad *tear* I def. would keep it at this lengh like this! Really Good Job!
pretty pink:)
ps. there was a fire in my building once but luckily they put it out without a whole amount of damage. I can def. feel the drama ther.

The short length and simplicity of this poem were really effective in conveying the power of fire. It doesn't take long for a small fire to spread and destroy everything in its path. Good work. And thankyou for the reviews :) Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Aww man this is sad. But fire is like this. I saw a trailor burn and it was gone in less then an hour or so. Awesome job! Hey come check out this site it's free. Post your stuff here as well. And by all means keep writing.. http://groups.msn.com/PoetsofToday/lobby1.msnw

you know...you could tweak this poem and morph the fire into something deeper, a metaphor or something. Yeah, I know. Fire is many times over-used for such practices and rarely done justice when used. A little cliche. Good job anyway.

~Quadellic~