I forgot to say this but were you watching Austin Powers while you were writing this because #1? There's a character in AP that's called #2!!

Anyway, u need to update this and HURRY UP WITH CHAPPIE TEN IN FATE!

Ja ne

~A*A*D

Hey, hey, hey Rika!

K, nice story and...uh...sorry about singing...ya. Nice job and see ya whenever I do...whether its at Tina's B-day or at urs or at School in September. K, L8er

~ Tasha

*jaw drops to the floor* Oh dear sweet mother of jesus... I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING!

This is a good start even though it's short. I love the suspense. I'm not going to ask you about reading one of my stories, because it looks like you have two peeps already asking you. But anyway please update, I know how you feel working with a friend on stories. I like being a indepent writer. Anywayz good story.
-Destin Scar
ps: How could they cheer for someone that died. lol what has this world come to. Love the story !

Er, I could use a bit more background but it's cool o_O

I think its pretty good. You leave me very suspisious now. come check out some of my story's please. any of which is your desire.

oh yea if you do r/r. thanx!

Wow, great start! I like it, sounds real cool! Update soon...PLEZ?! *Does first review dance* Could you maybe R&R one of mine if you have time?