*looks enviously at foxlair* Its amazing! Its really great you experimented because it certainly turned out for the best didn't it? Anyway...I'll be looking out for more..

very sweet and interesting, like a lot of imagery and the style as well, the use of the same word following into the next line for different meanings, very kool, muchly enjoyed this, awesome job

very well done! Original concept with well thought out ideas and word use. Good work!