Wow... this is a good poem, though it is sort of confusing the way you switch from 1st to 3rd person, and it sorta made me want to cry. Anyways, keep writing :

i love your poem it was so great it really touched me. wow i just can't forget it. it's so great. good work. and my friend ceruleanwaterz liked it too she said it was great well it is. good job you have a real talent/ keep up the good work.

Descriptive for a short poem. Nice work, again.

Hi!

I really like the poem, especially the ending and the format.

I don't know if it's speaking from experience or not, but I feel that you've really captured a moment.

Very touching.

Keep writing,

xxJxx