|Reviews for Cold Words|
| Startide Risen 11/6/03 . chapter 1
Frighteningly similar to my own situation...
Lovely phrasing-heart of glass, shall become my truth. Love it, love it!
| AVIGON 8/1/03 . chapter 1
I love it. Not too obvious, not too obscure; just right. Good idea to repeat some of the things in a different way... Makes it all hang together a bit more.
And you used all the words I like: cold, words, lies, truth.
| Lady B.V Rose 6/12/03 . chapter 1
Kool! _ Nuthin much more to say!
-'-,- a bloodstained rose
| cosmo-queen 6/12/03 . chapter 1
Great haiku- very meaningful. I especially liked the second part. This was very good, keep writing :)
| Keep it 100 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Good work. Using repetition made this flow well.
Heart of the Sword
| Mime 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Yes, words determine many things, and should be used wisely...
| CoolBeans18s 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Cool! 'Shall become the truth' was a great line, and the repetition drives home a point. Great job!
| iridium 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Interesting . . . the repetition of the first line in its seaparate tenses gives the group of haiku some unity.