Reviews for Cold Words
Startide Risen 11/6/03 . chapter 1
Frighteningly similar to my own situation...

Lovely phrasing-heart of glass, shall become my truth. Love it, love it!
AVIGON 8/1/03 . chapter 1
I love it. Not too obvious, not too obscure; just right. Good idea to repeat some of the things in a different way... Makes it all hang together a bit more.

And you used all the words I like: cold, words, lies, truth.
Lady B.V Rose 6/12/03 . chapter 1
Kool! _ Nuthin much more to say!

-'-,- a bloodstained rose
cosmo-queen 6/12/03 . chapter 1
Great haiku- very meaningful. I especially liked the second part. This was very good, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
Keep it 100 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Good work. Using repetition made this flow well.

Heart of the Sword
Mime 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Yes, words determine many things, and should be used wisely...
CoolBeans18s 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Cool! 'Shall become the truth' was a great line, and the repetition drives home a point. Great job!

CoolBeans18s
iridium 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Interesting . . . the repetition of the first line in its seaparate tenses gives the group of haiku some unity.