| Reviews for Cold Words |
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Startide Risen 11/6/03 . chapter 1Frighteningly similar to my own situation... Lovely phrasing-heart of glass, shall become my truth. Love it, love it! |
AVIGON 8/1/03 . chapter 1I love it. Not too obvious, not too obscure; just right. Good idea to repeat some of the things in a different way... Makes it all hang together a bit more. And you used all the words I like: cold, words, lies, truth. |
Lady B.V Rose 6/12/03 . chapter 1Kool! _ Nuthin much more to say! -'-,- a bloodstained rose |
cosmo-queen 6/12/03 . chapter 1Great haiku- very meaningful. I especially liked the second part. This was very good, keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
Keep it 100 6/11/03 . chapter 1Good work. Using repetition made this flow well. Heart of the Sword |
Mime 6/11/03 . chapter 1Yes, words determine many things, and should be used wisely... |
CoolBeans18s 6/11/03 . chapter 1Cool! 'Shall become the truth' was a great line, and the repetition drives home a point. Great job! CoolBeans18s |
iridium 6/11/03 . chapter 1Interesting . . . the repetition of the first line in its seaparate tenses gives the group of haiku some unity. |