"A tune of silence and madness." I feel like that all of the time...

"Beautiful and forbidden." I can definitely relate to that, as the person I've liked for years, is 'beautiful and forbidden' :P

:) You're amazing! You have such a genuine way of connecting to the reader!

i've been reading a lot of your older poems.. you used the word 'gray' a lot... anyways, i get the same feeling from this as i feel sometimes.. maybe i don't CARE for the person as much as i care for the feeling i have when i'm with somebody. good poem

It has always fascinated me on how the temperature of skin can change one's mood.D.

"Water dripped its thorny edges over me like waves to the beach,"

Beautiful.

Just remarkable.

Nice technique and idea.

Though I think that if you grouped certain lines together, it would have made the poem a lot stronger over all.

beautiful and deep. it's very well-written. i noticed a typo though. "prey" should be "pray" _

i especially liked the lines

"Blame is a word that escapes me,

I learned to play a different song,

a tune of silence, and madness."

that's powerful!

this poem was a very good read. i thoroughly enjoyed it _

blinkie

that had a very interesting tone and it was really deep. I enjoyed it a lot! Tell me if you think my poems are as deep!I would be honored if they even met to 1/20 of your standards!

pretty pink:)