I like this song. Very powerful. Good job.
~Sweet Sorrow

Very powerful song! Not sure what style of music it would be put to (i.e. rock 'n' roll, country, etc) fabulous and nothing i can complain about! Keep it up!

This song has potential. The concept is good, but it just needs a little work.

Wow!! That was beautiful and deep. keep writing-Spider

nice VERY nice...what kinda music your band play? sounds a bit...rockis neh? lol well anyways...i wrote one called "I Am Rain" not a very good one though...uhm also you MAY want to separate the Verses from the Chorus a TAD confusin!! ahh the well!! later!!

~*~ FromWithintheStormsIFly~*~