Wow! I could feel the anger of the poem while I was reading it. The last four lines are great!

omg! thats is so perfectly put..but dont you think that the person giving pity was only trying to be a good friend?

This is good... I love the way you use metaphors to describe sympathy...good job
-Ségolin

yet another brilliant powerful piece, also very true...

hey thats wicked good. your a good writer. R+R my poems u might relate to them PEACE!

i don't like to be pittied either, some of them just don't understand so why do they bother?

Wow!

I really like the poem, it's very true!

Keep writing,

xxJxx

powerful poem...involves many imotions expressed very passionately...the imagery of your words comes alive and all the feelings speak through to the reader...