If you want people to review and give constructive criticism, why don't you do that yourself? When you said all those things to Silencer7 it wasn't even about the story. You just insulted the person, I mean "Go to hell!" How unoriginal. In short you are a hypocrite considering the simple fact that your poem is even worse than hers! No one loves you

I like the style, and the fact that you seem to really put your soul on a platter. That is so hard to do, and I admire anyone who can open themselves up to criticism of their soul. Keep writing no matter what. It's great therapy whether people like it or not.

SICK! thats dope

rr my stuff u will prob find stuff u can relate to

Great poem I love the twist at the end of it, Good job

Brad

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Bradtherad