I loved it, made me laugh. It does have a lot of stereotypes though. Some people are poular because people have a fun time being around them, and they could be perfectly nice and friendly.

:)perfection.Sounds so much like girls at my school...eerie, almost, but I suppose most "popular" people are about the same.

HA HA HA HA!

So true.

hey outlaw! its mel from writersbloc (which did not quite work out :P ) i did finally take up an account with fictionpress as you suggested i should. i havent been on in a while but i remembered i'd wanted to send u a message and let you know i had set up an account. let me know what you think of my stuff!

btw, great poem/song. it made me laugh. my favorite line is "And I have to die my hair blonde / Otherwise being stupid would just be wrong" :)

Reminds me of a song called Popular.. it was a one hit wonder awhile back.. I liked that song, and I like this one :D Favorite lines: And I have to die my hair blonde, Otherwise being stupid would just be wrong.
Why? Because I've been called blonde at heart quite recently.
"Even though I fry my hair in a straightener" I straighten my hair, but it's not fried. I guess the popular ones just can't do it right :P
Only complaint: The popular people don't all fit into this song. They don't all follow the guidelines to be popular. Looking forward to more songs.

i love this! itd be mad as a rap
i was crackin up :D

this is great and funny at the same time...itz soo true!

Hahahahahaha!
When I was in eighth grade, I used to totally hate every single one of the popular people.
I HATED them.
And the people that you targeted in your song sound awfully close to the people who stalk my high school. (Short skirts, high-pitched voices, cheating)
I even bumped into this popular girl today in the lunchroom, (who was an freshman, no less) and she gave me this look, and called me a "B*"
For no reason.
People are cruel.
I love this song. It's so creative, and I like this line: "We all make fun of Jackson all the time
But when he's a billionaire, we'll be wondering why"
Hahahaha. Exactly. And guess where you're going? Into my "favorite authors" list...hehehe. Oh, yeah, and I'll get to reviewing your other stories later, "Gibson's Girl" looks pretty interesting because I love flappers. Love 'em.
Other fave quote in this song: "I like to rebel against authority
But only when I'm part of the majority"
Exactly. People only call themselves "rebels" when they are in a group, who is doing the same thing. It doesn't make sense...and is a bit illogical.
I'll get to reviewing your other stuff later.

oh my god, i'm doubling over right now :), thats got to be the funniest thing over in this website!

Oh oh oh, that's just too awesome... *falls on the ground laughing* Sadly enough, I know way too many people that could fit this decription perfectly... oh man, you hit the nail on the head with this one.
Thanks for making me laugh hysterically!
Always,
~Hollie Marie

Haha! That was great! Wow it's funny how you can picture all these people from your school and all that you wrote applies completely to all of them! lol wow i loved that... i love to write poetry and songs also. Please r+r my latest piece... it's called Fine Print. I hope you like it... it's written from personal experience... like most poems are.
~Lauren

Hilarious. :-) That's all.

I was mildly enjoying this poem (which, by the way, is chock full of stereotypes) - until:

"And I have to die my hair blonde
Otherwise being stupid would just be wrong."

I'm Chinese, but I have blonde friends. Dumb blonde jokes and references really annoy me - so just watch what you say.

I love this

You da WOman!*hands up in the air* Love this too. It gives a lot of interesting perspective, and it made me smile. Thanks for brightening up my day!* points to you* Take it away...