Stream-lined. Stream of consciousness writing. Very well written. Short and sweet.

I love this poem too! It's not as bad as what you think it is. Of course I should take my own advice and eat my own words.**

*Immortal Spirit*

nice poem... short n sweet. good job! keep it up!

I can't figure out if this poem is informative or inperative. "Time is forever flowing" then, "Respect the time you have been given".