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| crazygurlhyper13 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuseCONTINUE! |
| crazybunniesinmyhead 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseCool story. One little thing i noticed, and i hope you take constructive critisism, is that instead of putting semicolons you seem to put hyphons. I'm not absolutely positive if that's proper in english, but i know that semicolons are supposed to go there, and might look/sound better. |
| Iyonjin 2003-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseMine sibling hast stolen a part of my story idea! Oh well, paladins were never my style... -Honor bright |
| Jane Austen the 2nd 2003-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked the story alot especially the faith between Nathalia and Aderes! I hope you tel me what u think of some of my stuff and tell me your thoughts! Please be honest with me like I am with you! pretty pink:) |