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Reviews For: Lady, I Will Protect You!

crazygurlhyper13
2003-07-16
ch 1,
abuseCONTINUE!
crazybunniesinmyhead
2003-07-07
ch 1,
abuseCool story. One little thing i noticed, and i hope you take constructive critisism, is that instead of putting semicolons you seem to put hyphons. I'm not absolutely positive if that's proper in english, but i know that semicolons are supposed to go there, and might look/sound better.
Iyonjin
2003-06-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseMine sibling hast stolen a part of my story idea! Oh well, paladins were never my style...

-Honor bright
Jane Austen the 2nd
2003-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI liked the story alot especially the faith between Nathalia and Aderes! I hope you tel me what u think of some of my stuff and tell me your thoughts!
Please be honest with me like I am with you!
pretty pink:)
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