Aw. I was really getting into that story. :( So what if its like May? All you have to do is change some elements around and it would be cool. :) (Note. This fic is cool! I havent watched May btw)

You know... Every story has been written before. It's just a matter of how you present it that makes it your own. I think you should keep writing this, because some of us haven't seen the movie and think the writing is done very well.

You completly riped off the sotry and plot of "May". It was good though.

Did you take this from the movie "May"?
Because you named the character Angela, and the girl who played her was named Angela Bettis. You shouldn't steal ideas. Good writer though.

Isn't it against the law to steal the ideas from movies?

Aw well, As long as you came back. Haven't read anything interesting here lately, maybe you'll spice things up finally. Welcome back to the fray.

This story has a very good plot behind it which I hope to see come full circle. Looks like it hasn't been added on to in a while, but I hope you can find your muse and continue it! It sounds like it'll be cool as hell in the end.

hey this is really good.its really intriguing.will there be any more sewed friends ? continue and hurry and update!
if u can,review mine too pls?its a horror fic,but i havent really gotten past the intro yet..and even then its short.thanks

Wow... neat. I have a group of friends that lent this one girl our clothes, one chick donated a Marilyn Manson T-shirt, i let her borrow my hoodie, and someone lent her some paracute pants. We had so switch our cloths around for a while so everyone would have somthing that fit. It was funny, but akward at the same time.

wow.

I liked this story better when it was called "May".

Great story!! I'd love to know whats gonna happen. Poor angela, its nice that someone took pity on her and got rid of that ghastly sounding dress. Looks like you haven't updated in a while. Don't say this story is being left to die :)

this is gr8, its really original, and i really wanna know what happens next!
if u have time please can u reveiw some of my stuff?
- cindie

i like this. it's gettin good

have you seen the movie "may". this is an awful lot like it. if you haven't see in, you should!