ahh clifhanger ...update soon please,its been so long

"-"more please more."-"what's going to happen?("~")

omg...wats going to happen next?please update soon...

okay. im frickin confused with the names. could you at least give a description of the characters first in the beginning or something? cause you use both first and surnames which adds to the confusion. awesome story anyways.

Shit... that sucks, but oh well... i suppose that it'll all get resolved eventally... one thing i've noticed between this and the original version is that you make Takeshi's character alot more likeable... but anyways great chapter and i think that you should post the old version again because i really liked some of those sceans.

But yeah... UPDATE SOON!

oh. clif hanger! more please i love it!:)

ahh suspenseful
i love how this story is turning out
update :]

This is soo exciting I wonder what's going to happen next. Please don't hurt akemi nor takeshi.akemi and takeshi forever.

OMg I just finished reading the whole story again and it's still as awesome as before.I wonder what's going to happen next? Please update soon this story is to awesome without an ending.I love akemi and takeshi.

Omg dis chappy is so cutte.please update son please

That was a pretty funny episode lol... i enjoyed this one alot. I agree with Akemi about sayaka she is such a B*H, but that's what makes the book so good lol.. XD... keep up the good work.

No updates in so long i had to go back and reread the entire story today ;]

omg this chapter is so awesome its making me guess on whats going to happen to the next chapter. i hope that Akemi and Takeshi have an happy ending...Please update son its such a great story...
..thanks..

This is a really good story please continue it please.

dis chap. is so cute...looking forward to the next chapter...