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| unknown'writer'loved 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abusei like the beginning of this especially - the bit about kael being immature. it always bugs me when people write characters being all overly angsty because of small situations (attempting to kill themselves because of a fight over groceries was a situation i wrote years ago o_0) and the other character is like "OH MY GOD I'M SO SORRY IT'S MY FAULT YOU'RE SCREWED UP" whereas in this it's like "Damn, he's immature and insecure, and it scares me." Very realistic, methinks. And now I need sleep. |
| i-see-faeries 2007-07-25 ch 1, | abuseHaha. Sully makes me laugh. His blunt thought is amusing, even though it probably wasn't meant that way. I love it. This is actually my favorite pairing in your story. But how much Kael changed ** me off and ruined it for me. Eh, still love this though. |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI love them together! and Sully is so fighting fate. |
| Kizuna 2006-07-29 ch 1, | abuseOh! Ths was good! I hope they will become a couple!!:) |
| Kenya Bloodstone 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAww Kael you have Sully SCARED! lol... Its okay Sully you find love :) ~Kenya~ |
| ddz008 2004-01-30 ch 1, | abuseSully is such an idiot sometimes... Poor Sully... I love this couple! |
| r.mai 2003-08-19 ch 1, | abuseokay, i'm only SLIGHTLY less **... *puts her tennis racket and rifle away* -_-; I can hit pretty damn well and shoot more than decently.. *wags her finger at Sully* you stupid, stupid dumb **. Damn straight I'm not gonna sympathize or empathize with you! *mutters a long string of profanities* I guess it is gonna happen then, huh? I won't be so sure about not beating the ** out of him next time... hopefully Kael's friends do it for him... gr... and i was so happy over the drunk scene in chapter 21! *pounds the wall* blah, *goes to read more* |
| Ever Be 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abusewow ok, i guess i don't hate him anymore. ah you're so mean to kael and sully! but it's probably fun for you, isn't it? ;) i like your idea for the little side series, it really gives a chance to see what they all think! |
| newtypeshadow 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abusethe last line was perfect. how can i not love sully after this? his voice and his complex and his weakness and his slutiness and the reason for it he won't mention -- this one's definately my fav. ^__^ 'After I noticed his eyes though, I started wanting to him, and once I started that…' |
| NotEnough 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseMAKE HIM FIX THE PROBLEMS! You know, you can love this...git, but he really is a git! I mean, he uses people, and he doesn't care. He knows he's hurting them, and he doesn't stop! Puh chuh, poor Kael, but i'm biased i fell in love with kael in his P.O.V thing. I love your stories. Dammit. Hmph...evil. |
| ola 2003-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethose 3 last sentences say it all. he's a bit messed up (as in: confused.) but he's a cool character. i actually like him. i hope there'll be more of him in ...err... what was the name of that story? flawless? yea. that one!! more of everyone!more more more!! please? *grins and waves* |
| WorthWaitingFor 2003-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI love Sully! I knew I would once I met him! Wonderful once again. Aw! I just want everyone to be together and happy. Chad with Darryl, Sully with Kael, Skylar with Mikah (but especially those last two). Can't wait for the next chapter of Flawless. Keep up the good work! |