|Reviews for Trapped|
| AnnaSun 10/8/03 . chapter 1
Well done another well written poem.
Thanks for sharing :)
| Last-Chael 10/2/03 . chapter 1
WOW! This is brilliant. It reminded me of a quote from Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers.
Éowyn: Women of this country learned long ago that those without swords may still die upon them. I fear neither death nor pain.
Aragorn: What do you fear, my lady?
Éowyn: A cage. To stay behind bars until use and old age accept them and all chance of valor has gone beyond recall or desire.
It really shows the feeling I think.
| Kyalia 6/26/03 . chapter 1
I like the metaphors here.
| cosmo-queen 6/17/03 . chapter 1
I liked this, very good poem. You describe that feeling of being trapped with no escape very well. Keep writing :)
| Yaviewen 6/14/03 . chapter 1
You have a gift with poetry... I'm jealous! Loved it!