another great chapter. but i must say i'm suspicious of octavia. i can see that malcolm has the normal low self esteem, but not only that he does seem sort of plain and octavia does seem to be that special sort of girl. i feel like she has an ulterior motive, and i dunno if i trust jon around octavia. he just seems a little weird, almost mysterious as to his real deeper emotions...

hello kaika

i dont know if you remember my story, religion, but you faithfully left me many reviews, not just for that story, but others too. this was like two years ago. i havent put up a story in a long time. but i think i will again...

this chapter was long but it kept my attention the whole time. everything is awesome. and i love the whole sarcastic tone of voice in everything. lol. i only wish i had started reading your stuff sooner. i will definitely read the rest of this story.

BRILLIANT story! I just can't stop reading it! :o...

*worships*

I simply love it, hope you update soon ;)

i've decided i really like jayce. nathan is annoying.

update soon!

oh man, i can really see the change in Malcolm's character in this chapter. i love this story soo much.

I think you should be famous! Have another chapter up soon pa pa please!

oh my goodness! Get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Things are really getting so good. With the custody battle, and everything that's going on with Octavia, I really want to see what happens!

Hehe. this is such a great story. As I already said, update as soon as possible _

Arayuldawen

I just love this story.

Come back! I love your stories! xx

you. are one sick girl. Why do you love gays? are you gay? malcom should get over with his sucky life and just die.

huh? 'its jordan'? Im confused.

People Jordan is Octavia's brother. Remember?

Who's Jordan? I don't know if you've mentioned him before...if so, it's been so long that I don't remember who he is. Dammit. That's going to bother me.

So yeah, the chapter...I love Malcolm's dad. I just...do. I'm glad that Malcolm has a good shot at being able to live with his father, instead of his mom. As I'm sure you're aware, I'm not a fan of his mom anymore.

Octavia...I really hope Malcolm doesn't get back together with her. I mean, I know he likes her and is over what happened, but I'm not big on forgiving betrayal of any sort. So, blah her.

So, is Malcolm going to find himself hanging around Jayce more often? I'd like to see him around Jayce more because jayce seems like an OK guy. I...hope? You have a way with making people seem one way and then BAM they turn out to be the complete opposite. Nathan, for example. He apologized. Wowzers. Didn't see that coming.

Yeah, this review is going to be short because it's 315 in the morning. I wrote about most of the chapter, but I'm tired and not feeling very...awake? So, good job, update soon.

Jess

At least the word "sequel" means that Malcom ain't gonne die, I think? ) And, well, thanks for updating.

Great chapter! Now you better update soon! I want to know what happened to Jordan. Later.