|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Mystified 2003-06-28 ch 3, | abuseThat's supposed to be completed?! Oh, come on, you can't just leave me hanging here. I think the idea is good, and I just love her name. |
| LittleMaggie 2003-06-18 ch 3, | abuseOh, I see where this is going... Rain is constantly thinking about Josh, about the friend she once had. She has a hard time splitting away from him, always wondering what the odds are that she might get him back. and Josh, he thinks of her often too, and is coming too see her. While Josh is trying his hardest to move closer to her, Rain is trying her hardest to move away. I love the concept, and I like her name! Good job so far, keep updating. |
| LittleMaggie 2003-06-18 ch 2, | abuseOh, so after ten years, they will finally get to see one another... I like it... you create good emotions, even in short prose-like chapters, you illustrate emotion well, and create good images. |
| LittleMaggie 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOh... what a lovely, mysterious, sad first chapter. I'm off to read the next one now. |
| Mush Jones 2003-06-16 ch 3, | abuseLYSE! Let's get more of this up will ya!! I love it man! I know I read the first 2 chapters at school, I'm not sure about the third. But lets get cranken with some more eh? Much love! XO |