 AutumnRhapsody 2003-09-13 . chapter 1I really like this, the seperation of lines is really good, and it is so very true.
It might sound better if it was "because/sometimes/it feels good/to cry", w/sometimes first, I think it has something to do w/the rhythm. |
 Frodo 2003-06-27 . chapter 1Ah... crying. I don't do that that often, but yeah, when you get those moments, it's just best to cry. Personally, I like to cry till I can't cry anymore, then that way I'm so tired I fall asleep, thus having not to deal with family who may be inquisitive. Tears show weakness, frailty, things I don't think we want to present to everyone. Interesting thoughts.
-Frodo |