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AutumnRhapsody 2003-09-13 . chapter 1
I really like this, the seperation of lines is really good, and it is so very true.
It might sound better if it was "because/sometimes/it feels good/to cry", w/sometimes first, I think it has something to do w/the rhythm.
WolfOfBloodMoon 2003-08-05 . chapter 1
This a good poem. Really nice.

~Crystal Unicorn2
T3h Maverick 2003-07-09 . chapter 1
Hey . . . that's really good. It captures what you feel when you just have to cry. :'('' *sniff*
Frodo 2003-06-27 . chapter 1
Ah... crying. I don't do that that often, but yeah, when you get those moments, it's just best to cry. Personally, I like to cry till I can't cry anymore, then that way I'm so tired I fall asleep, thus having not to deal with family who may be inquisitive. Tears show weakness, frailty, things I don't think we want to present to everyone. Interesting thoughts.
-Frodo
CoolBeans18s 2003-06-24 . chapter 1
I've read this before... Was it on one of your other accounts? Hm. But it is still as good as it was when I first read it!

~ CoolBeans18s
kaika switched 2003-06-19 . chapter 1
Aw, that was a beautiful poem. I love the format you wrote it in. Keep writing!
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