hey...nice poem, you have written a lil more here lately...i think newayz...maybe i just havent noticed it b4...but, this IS a reat poem/stort because i myself know what it is like to see someone love driftin away...but maybe you should just im that damn river and go after them ... :-S

Nice...really captures the moment.

I really love this poem. It is filled with so much emotion, and I like that.

Lilly