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| dorothy 2003-09-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseJesse, you almost made me cry. (Not that it's hard to do...) I like the switching of the prospectives, and how the "deep dark secrets" weren't revealed until the very end. Muahaha. It was a very believable relationship; good job. Enough fun and craziness to be entertaining, but enough pain and reality to make it seem real. Squee. |
| And All That Could Have Bee... 2003-08-31 ch 3, | abuseMORE! I demand it. . .Please? |
| shopaholic4nd1 2003-06-13 ch 2, | abuseThis is a really interesting story... please continue! I can't wait to see where you are going with this... |