Aw! This is so sad!! But I love it. It's great imagery. You know that the 8th paragraph is exactly the same as the one in Aerin? Not a problem, just something I noticed.

This is brilliant! Its really touching, I wonder if you're going to actually write whats in the notebooks, what they wrote, and what the girl said about him when he was actually alive. I wonder what's going to happen to him now that she's gone...

Waah..that was so sad...*breathes* it's beautiful. You're a really great writer. keep writing!

*snif* Wa! You got me all depressed!
Wonderful writing though.
(this is Hellen by the way)

Um... not the ending i imagined! Great job taking the childish, the adolescent, and proving the stereotype wrong. Teens can have the same emotional experiences adults can and u capture that marvelously in the story. The end of the story was as good as any adult drama and makes a huge impact. Great job!