Outstanding piece. You are a great poet..Wish I had a pinch of your talent..Keep writing..

*applause* aw! i really, really REALLY liked this one. lol actually, i love all your love poems, their so sweet and touching and this one in particular is very potent. what i most liked about it was how each word really stood on its own, the lack of long drawn-out lines made the words that were here stronger. some of my favorite bits: "caught amid the storm of dreams," "that drops its light in scattered beams," "i yawn away the yesterday" (that is the best line of poetry i've read all day: the way it sounds alone is genius and the image to go along with it is so great ~ perfect combination! ;), "like a secret lover's kiss" (sidenote: add an apostrophe into "lovers" in your version), "adorned with dew," and "my day's foundation laid with light." *smiles* yes, i highly enjoyed this. and i'm glad you had a good day! summer's coming hang in there! nice work agian, much kudos chico.

*sighs* This one is so beautiful...I marvel at the way you choose the words and put them together to such a delighting, heart-warming poem.

I'm happy for you :)

~Stoffpferd~