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| sweetcicily 2004-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI like the way that you lay out our "classic" love story. We all wish to have a life like that, but the world seems to like throwing people for a loop. The wistful last line is a nice touch. |
| Cunning Coyote 2003-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty darn good. I especilly love the ending |