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| Melody1 2004-07-10 ch 1,  | abuseLol, cute story. I used to watch I Dream of Jeannie all the time when I was little. Your Genie didn't seem to be of that variety though. Um...no big deal about not having names, I didn't really even notice. I'm writing a short story for english...well I was anyway, and I'm adamant about the main guy not having a name. I like the idea of it. But anyway, nice ending. I wasn't expecting it. I feel kinda bad for the guy though. Lol. ~Mel` |
| ardenz 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abusethis sort of reminded me of bedazzled but i didn't really get the ending bit. it's cute though and i liked it. wouldn't mind reading more chapters of it if you were planning to continue. |