Good poem! However, I would say the rating is a bit low, I think that "T" would be more accurate, or possibly "M." This isn't appropriate for a nine-year-old.

This was a great read. Really mixed emotions going on there, forbidden emotions.

Very sensual and honest, very good.

crazy? can't see why you'd say that, this was beautiful, just like the title, nice way to explain what the lesser of us can't.

Kenzie

Whoa, that was so sad. Yet, so good. You have talent. Great poem. If you want to read my stuff which is kind of like yours. Please, read and review... . ?userid352615

*sigh*

It's absolutely gorgeous. And terribly moving.

Emotions ring very clear in this piece, only to be topped by the vivid images you've painted with your words. I feel as if I've intruded on a series of intimate scenes, not meant to be shared with passerbyers. I would say that the theme is generally very simple... but oh, the imagery is so beautiful... heartwrenching.

Worthy of many praises.

*LostC