wow, that was really deep and well written. great work.

Wow...Your imagery, emotion, all well put to where the reader is there. Well done, well done indeed.

You started with an interesting topic lol I wasnt expecting what I read! This was a good poem! Nice work!

pretty pink:)

ps. lol I liked your review of yourself on one of your previous poems! Ha ha

How many times have you changed you penname? Oi, make up your mind XD! Funny, I think I can kind of relate this to a scene in Kingdom Hearts oo;; Maybe I'm just weird...

I like it. I would interpret as the umbrella was someone who protected you, but they passed away...?

I like it alot _ the title is very unique

Ugh, i *kinda* read your profile, it's LoNg o.O but don't worry, mine used to be kinda long, but i condenced it, heh.

Thank you for your review on my poems-

Ja,

Ame

that was really good!