 bleh 2005-01-30 . chapter 1 it been over a year and a half since you started this. i hope you finish this too cuz ur a great writer and i lok forward to any stories you continue. |
 SILENT TROWA 2004-07-31 . chapter 2WOW. Ive been here many a few years, and longer at ff.net. Your writing is genious.
i consider myself a cliche'd tough guy, i rite military action thrillers and the lke, but i have a weakness like all others.
I melt like a flan in a cupboard at good romance, doubly so with lesbian romance.I am currently reading all the broken glass and i became very interested with this story, and i havent seen a character as unique as aya in a LONG time. I dont think i need to tell you how far ahead of the other authors you are in your content and mechanics, the numbers can say it alone. |
 Kyattsuai 2004-05-07 . chapter 2Hi!
I just wanna tell you that I love your fic All the Broken Glass!
I really love the characters, real simples and at the same time
with their own personalities and attitudes!
I Love Jasper and Sedra! They were my favorite characters, but in
the end I really couldn't help feel sad for Aya, I really live her too.
Actually I'm writing a story right about the anime Weiss Kreuz that is a bit inspire in her.. is yaoi..
I really like the end of the story, the essays were really good and
I almost feel sad for know that the fic were in the end!
Anyway, keep writing and I'll keep reading your stuff!! ^^
Kisses
~~ KittyBlue |
 Pirate Fan 2004-03-21 . chapter 2Hey, this is really good. I just finished read AtBG and I really loved that story. You are a amazing author! I think I'm in love with you... but I'm a heterosexual male so that wouldnt work out, would it? Damn, oh well. I really like it when you writ Shoujo-Aie because I tend to like it more than Shounen-Ai, although they are both good. Please update soon or I'll... um... push... you... Okay, I couldnt think of anything. Just keep writing, plz!
Oh and I really like how you're doing this. I can really see why Sano and Aya are best friends. You are truely talented at capturing you're characters emotions.
P.S. I think you should continue with Aya's POV! |
 Densetsu 2003-07-24 . chapter 2 Beauty achieved thrice over, my dear. I quite enjoy your work. Aya's situation with her father is intriguing, somehow. I would that you may finish this. ^-^
~ Moriah |
 silvereyes807 2003-07-03 . chapter 2 i didn't like quite as much as i liked ATBG, but so far so good. i hope that you continue with it, Aya seemed to just be forgetable in ATBG, but now seeing things through her eyes kind of breaths life into her. ^_^ i'm starting to like her.
are you going to write about what happened to Himi? i'm courious to findout how she ended up pergant, and to how life treated her after she left. |
 midnyte-fox 2003-06-28 . chapter 2Wow... That was a little uncomfortable for me, because it hit a little close to home. But it was really good! Don't let my comments discourage you, or anyone else's! I'd like to read more. Again, talented! Can't wait for your next update! |
 Wolveress 2003-06-23 . chapter 2Writing in Aya's point of view is cool.I didn't know she had THAT kinda problem...
Its like reading All The Silent Tears I've Shed but in a different view point which is cool. I know thats what your trying to achieve. So do keep writing it in her point of view.
If you do change.. it might get kinda confusing.
None the less... i still, totally enjoy your story! |
 forever fallen 2003-06-22 . chapter 2 nonononono!! Please continue this! Its really eye-opening to see ATBG though Aya's eyes.
I love the way you write, it never gets boring! :) :showers you with compements: you deserve 'em.
Poor Aya, she doesn't have it easy does she? I cant wait to see the next chapter of this. :) |
 midnyte-fox 2003-06-16 . chapter 1I love side-stories! It gives you a chance to get to know the other characters in different ways. This was a great first chapter. I 'm glad you started off at the same point you did in ATBG. It puts things in a similar line of perspective. It's so interesting to see how people can be such good friends, like Aya and Sano, yet have lives that follow such different paths. Can't wait for more updates, and I hope they come soon! |
 Wolveress 2003-06-15 . chapter 1I haven't read All the Broken Glasses yet... but i think this is pretty cool.
The language is really witty~ But i guess thats the kind of person you want to portray Aya as.
So now i'll just have to go read Broken Glasses or i'll be damned. |