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| instantvoodo 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseIt's very deep, emotional. I felt a lot of things reading this. |
| GodzGirl 2005-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a great poem! Very sad, but good visuals. I think you could've spent a little more time at the beginning about how much he had worked and achieved. Then it would've been sadder when he died. Good job. |
| liz 2005-03-26 ch 1, anon. | abusetwo words: excellent stuff |
| LaTierraSutil 2004-04-04 ch 1, | abusewow. i am in awe. this is really really really really good. excellent word usage. |
| Misutii Tennyo 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abuseOh... wow. That is... really really really good. |
| Destin 2003-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great poem ! Please write more poems ! I would love to read more ^^ -Destin |
| Prince(ss) of Hell 2003-07-30 ch 1, | abuseVery morbid, no? But exceedingly good nonetheless! I like morbid angsty things =^^= you're a very talented poet! Wish I was half as good... ~Prince(ss) |
| Wilds Duez 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWell written. I'm not one for poetry and all but hey sounded pretty nice. Hey, ya like manga, then check out mine! |
| erpkewotjewt 2003-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm not much for poetry, but it was good! I found it kinda hard to understand, but the worrds flow well. Please write a book though, I like your righting style. Oh and your a manga fan, YEAH! That and your the only other person I've found who reads Naurto! I ran into it in a Shogen Jump I borrowed (*cough*, well kinda took, but I gave it back) and I really liked it. |
| Anliya 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseVery nice poem. I love your choice of words and the poetic tone it gives to this piece. =] |
| Arayuldawen 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abusewow. Thats really good. ~Arayuldawen~ |
| AethraZip 2003-07-01 ch 1, | abuseNow, are you referring to Abraham Lincoln, or Abraham from the Old Testament? Well, regardless, it's certainly a well-written poem! |