It's very deep, emotional.
I felt a lot of things reading this.

This is a great poem! Very sad, but good visuals. I think you could've spent a little more time at the beginning about how much he had worked and achieved. Then it would've been sadder when he died. Good job.

two words: excellent stuff

wow. i am in awe. this is really really really really good. excellent word usage.

Oh... wow. That is... really really really good.

This is a great poem ! Please write more poems ! I would love to read more ^^
-Destin

Very morbid, no? But exceedingly good nonetheless! I like morbid angsty things =^^= you're a very talented poet! Wish I was half as good...

~Prince(ss)

Well written. I'm not one for poetry and all but hey sounded pretty nice. Hey, ya like manga, then check out mine!

I'm not much for poetry, but it was good! I found it kinda hard to understand, but the worrds flow well. Please write a book though, I like your righting style. Oh and your a manga fan, YEAH! That and your the only other person I've found who reads Naurto! I ran into it in a Shogen Jump I borrowed (*cough*, well kinda took, but I gave it back) and I really liked it.

Very nice poem. I love your choice of words and the poetic tone it gives to this piece. =]

wow. Thats really good.

~Arayuldawen~

Now, are you referring to Abraham Lincoln, or Abraham from the Old Testament? Well, regardless, it's certainly a well-written poem!