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| Kit 2004-01-14 ch 1, | This was always one of my favourites. Your words in this poem remind me how determined u can be when you want something. I was always so happy that it was me... |
| Jaclyn 2003-10-11 ch 1, | Oh, beautiful. That's beautiful. And cozy. Love that couplet at the end. What you said about Until -- that's exactly why I wrote it. To make insomnia less ugly. To wrap it in beauty and meaning and warmth, as you said so eloquently. I love that you knew exactly what I was trying to say, trying to do. And that you understand. |
| anonymous 2003-06-16 ch 1, | Your girldfriend must be really special. ;) I certainly hope she knows how much you love her and how much you have to care to write such wonderful poetry for her. |
| chogranger 2003-06-15 ch 1, | Oh my God. That's amazing! You're an excellent poet. |