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Reviews For: A Lover's Promise

Kit
2004-01-14
ch 1,
This was always one of my favourites. Your words in this poem remind me how determined u can be when you want something. I was always so happy that it was me...
Jaclyn
2003-10-11
ch 1,
Oh, beautiful. That's beautiful. And cozy. Love that couplet at the end.

What you said about Until -- that's exactly why I wrote it. To make insomnia less ugly. To wrap it in beauty and meaning and warmth, as you said so eloquently. I love that you knew exactly what I was trying to say, trying to do. And that you understand.
anonymous
2003-06-16
ch 1,
Your girldfriend must be really special. ;) I certainly hope she knows how much you love her and how much you have to care to write such wonderful poetry for her.
chogranger
2003-06-15
ch 1,
Oh my God. That's amazing! You're an excellent poet.
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