|Reviews for Empty|
| Angel Bunny 6/19/03 . chapter 1
You have a bad case of people-dependency. Learn to let go of your ties with people and live a life without people leading you around...Be happy, Jesus loves you!
| Silverfire Starr 6/15/03 . chapter 1
Oh, I know that feeling, like there's no light in an empty darkness. Great work!
| quadellic 6/15/03 . chapter 1
hm...interesting and though many people tend to use metaphors with this subject especially you did not and that was very intriguing. Bravo, I can't wait to read your other work, this stands very expressive and though a free verse, I doubt we all think in rhyme especially at times like these! I like it alot!
| endless040 6/15/03 . chapter 1
Great poem, Love the first two lines...Great job...