You have a bad case of people-dependency. Learn to let go of your ties with people and live a life without people leading you around...Be happy, Jesus loves you!

Angel Bunny

Oh, I know that feeling, like there's no light in an empty darkness. Great work!

hm...interesting and though many people tend to use metaphors with this subject especially you did not and that was very intriguing. Bravo, I can't wait to read your other work, this stands very expressive and though a free verse, I doubt we all think in rhyme especially at times like these! I like it alot!

Quadellic

Great poem, Love the first two lines...Great job...