...damn you. -.-;

You sound so sure ppl will like this in your summary, so I've come to prove you wrong! BWAAHA! I've come to say I hate this and you suck!
But that would be a lie on two ounts, so I won't say that.
I love the imagery and plot and descriptions, though I dislike first person with this character. *Will not use said character's name*
Please continue, cuz we know you have more written. So get on it already! (This AND Wanderers of Gaia, damnit!)
Bye! ^_~

YAY KAIDONA!! now update before i attack with the rubber mallet of doom... ok!
~janelle~

ooh! very nice! I like it, don't let the possible writer's block take over! write more! please?

I had to read your other stuff since I liked Wanderers of Gaia so much. This one is good. I like how you wrote it in first person. I also like how throughout the whole thing, you don't mention once whether this character you're writing about is male or female and how you don't mention names. It compels me to read further and find this stuff out.
(Btw: You MUST write more!!)

i like this so far
please write more, i wanna see where this goes