A very simple yet deep. You didnt need to have alot of words to tell this story. I like it's simplicity...

Keep up the good work

-melai

Very creative format! And the ending was perfect. Keep writing.

wow. i liked the fact that all of this took place in a week. it would seem rushed, which was good for this context. i also liked the ending. how contradictory, it seems. bittersweet, and full of emotion. gorgeous.

-trinity

beautifully bittersweet. the way you divided the relationship into days- it's like the phases people go through with the real things, isn't it? even when they last more than a week, lol.

interesting. The story was rushed though, but I understand why. sad.

This was wonderful, and sad. So, I loved it! Keep it up, please!!

Very sentimental te you have here. Kind of strange ow this huge romance last just a week,but then again, "with matters of the heart there is no time to waste." Nice story all in all.

It sweet, yet captivating and a bit of aura of mystery, grim yet sentimental. I have no idea what am I saying but this is really good. :)

This is a very nice peice of material. I like it. Short, sweet and romantic. Nice touch. Good job. Keep up the good writings.

~Shadow

That was so sad and sweet. I think it would make a great extended story. If you write one, make sure to tell me!

This is such a nice poetic short story. Very moving, I'm quite glad that I read it.

o it's nice. so he didnt ditch u? i like it ;) l0l.

I really like this...its short, but it is interesting. You really know how to use the riht words.

My fp name is really crazychik. I was lazy to log on. I read this and I thought "whoa..this guy is good". I really loved this! I am going to give a shot at your other stories, but to let you know...I love this!

aw that was so0o0o sad,gr8 story