...We have a lot to catch up on...I hope we can.

wow, as i keep reading your older stuff i get more and more amazed, how you capture, that moment of angst and wow, real good job, and sorry but u have lots to read so im taking my time here, but they are all great.
pili

your images of suicide are not far from my own and yet so different..I liked it alot

wow...u are really good and ur stuff is breathtaking. I can't wait to read more

Such a haunting poem...it doesn't help that I'm listening to Evanescence's song titled Tourniquet, either. Back to the point...
The repition of 'So clearly, so clearly' Brought a very first-hand view to the poem. Well done
>winged one

*shiver*

it's another outstanding poem, when something as little and usually insignificant(to me at least) can bring back such a rich 'vision' if I may.

TL Demeter

wow... that's so... eerie. Rah, that's a horrible way to try and classify that fantastic piece of poetic genius but what i'm trying to say (and failing miserably), is that it leaves you with a feeling of darkness... though you prob know that.. you did write it. Sorry i'll shut up now.

nice kid

Damn...thats all I can say right now, such an amazing poem with the topic you chose, Im so in love with this, the 'so clearly' repition adds to it so much, its such a wonderful poem I can't even express how in love with this I am, fantasic job ^^