Excellent poem. I sure would love to travel the world, as it's such a beautiful place, but to travel, you need money, and I don't have too much of that at the moment! But in the meanwhile, I'm quite content at travelling through countries via books and pictures, without having to pay a cent I may add, knowing that perhaps one day I'll see them for real. Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

i finished it all after reading for 18 straight hours and staying awake for 48! heh heh... it was COOL! malfoy is so STOOPID. but a friendly, adorable kind of stoopid, am i right?

hey i like it cool, coud mqaybe use some revising, read it aloud to yourself maybe but i love the idea really awsome (im on page 347 of hp after 3 hrs of reading!)
elise

Not bad, keep up the good work