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the mouse that roared
2004-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really sweet song/poem. It makes me smile just to see someone smile about someone smiling. heehee. It's so pretty...
becca
2003-10-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love the emotion poured into this - how many times have a thought like this about my best friends?! This is magnificently written and moving, thanks.

-becca
strongwind
2003-09-25
ch 1,
abusei never knew what a great and terific friend you are- a really real poem!
KayWest
2003-08-07
ch 1,
abuseThis is exactly what I've been trying to say to a friend of mine, who has also been going through hard times. Thank you.. this is truly wonderful.

~KayWest
Aureya of Chocolate
2003-07-09
ch 1,
abuseoh WOW

i LOVED that

you're so full of talent, did you know that? of course you did, i bet people tell you that ALL THE TIME

lotsa luv,
jazzo
Inoperative
2003-07-06
ch 1,
abusei really like this one. my favorite part had to be the last four lines. and i really liked this bit: "Like a sunflower opening in early morn /After years of being scared to try..."

yeah, i felt that was very poetic...
Kezarahk
2003-06-28
ch 1,
abuseSweet; a rejoicing with those who rejoice.
Psycho-kyugurl
2003-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is lovely. Every word is just so right and fitted well, harmonized with one another. You are good!
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