personally, i found it a little confusing... but it was really good. thankyou for the constructive critcism and thanks for reveiwing!! : > )

i defenant change from your other stuff, but it is still as great, i love autumn...and winter..at night

wow. that was really nice. very different from your other poems, but a really nice change.

hey that was a good poem. you are a good writer maybe one of my favorites. if u want you should read some of my poems and review them to let me know if u like or hate them ( and or what u like or hate about them) i suggest ("time", "life(or a small part of it)", "you f* c* and girl1/girl2) thanx