I _love_ this! It really makes you think. Oddly reminds me of one of my poems...hrrm...anyway, I really really like this. I like the images you create and (as I mentioned in my previous review) I love your writing style. It's very straightforward but elegant at the same time.

Wow ^.^ I likey! Hehe. This is really cool and whether or not that has anything to do with me a fantasy lover, I don't know. But I think this is a great example of fantasy poetry, reminds me of endless fantasy stories.
The rhyming is done very nicely. I think you could do more with the formatting then again thats not what is entirely important and I know FP.Net can be hard to work with in concerning this.
Over all, very nice.
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-

I'm not sure I understand what it means, but I like the poem